Friday, 1 June 2018

Cross Country

I am starting to slow down and now I am picking up the pace. As I go past people are cheering in the crowd, people are playing before their race and I see green and blue t shirts along the white fence. My legs are racing then they are suddenly hurting and I’m slowing down right before a hill. My heart is racing and my legs are aching. Before we start to race I am very nervous  because it is my first cross country race. Suddenly a lady started to say the years 4 girls are about to race. As I am going past I see lots of road marks to show where we need to go. Just before I was half way through the track I saw people finishing the race. Next year I want to get 6th place because I came last place this year.

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  1. Anonymous7 June 2018 at 09:08

    Hi Hannah, Violet here. I like how you described what you were doing,seeing and hearing and I hope you come 1st place next year.

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  2. Amelia27 June 2018 at 09:40

    Hi Hannah, Amelia here. I think you did a good job describing your cross country race. I think you could do a bit more writing on your race.I hope you come 6th place next year. I came 7th.

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