Thank you for sharing your post on Yusra Mardini. She has had quite an amazing life, it’s hard to believe!
I noticed that your post is the same as Yusra’s website. To get full points for this activity you need retell Yusra’s journey in your own words. Do you think you could update your blog? You could even bullet point the key ideas of her story if that is easier. I’d love to see you tell the story in your own way :)
Hi Hannah,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your post on Yusra Mardini. She has had quite an amazing life, it’s hard to believe!
I noticed that your post is the same as Yusra’s website. To get full points for this activity you need retell Yusra’s journey in your own words. Do you think you could update your blog? You could even bullet point the key ideas of her story if that is easier. I’d love to see you tell the story in your own way :)
Beren
Hi Beren. Thanks for commenting on my blog.
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